ellllo Mohamd I wanna know what's my gramatically and punctuationlly faults?

Hellllo X!

How are you and your family? Has anything new happened in your life?

We were recently traveling in Mexico, a very different culture and life, where we went to a village festival. As family here is also very important we visited several and noted very strong family emotion, causing us to even more dearly miss our own, and yours too--now in Iran.

Hope everything working well for you and your family!

These days I practice more yoga and meditation, can easily detect little change in mind. Maybe now I will start to write more about travel, who knows. Let's see..😄


Been fun May





How is your life? Care to update?
Good wishes to you and your family.👍🏼

Now just gram and punct

Hellllo X(,) (!) (--) etc
How are you?
How are you and your family? Something new happen in life?
We were travelling in Mexico, a very different culture and life than here. We have been to a villiage for festival. The family here is also very important. We visited some families and got very strong family emotion. We miss our family and your Iran family also.
Hope everything works well for you and your family!
These days I practice more yoga and meditation than before. I could tell the little change in my mind. Maybe I will start to write more things about travel than before. Who knows. Lets see..😄
How is your life? Some update?
Good wishes for you and your family