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I wonder if you let me know if this sentence is written correctly

 
 
sky123
 
Reply Sun 10 Jul, 2016 12:27 pm
1-"I wonder if you let me know if you have a vacancy"
My source of concern is using two if in one sentence. I would be grateful if you advise me if it is correct or it can be written in a better way.
2-"Receiving BS in 7 terms and straightly qualified for MS."
Firstly I want to know if this phrase generally make sense and then I doubt over using " receiving" for Bachelor of Science degree and also the term
" straightly qualified for MS " whether it is true or better to write it in another way for example " straightly qualifying for MS" or " straightly qualified for MS program " or something else?
 
ehBeth
 
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Reply Mon 11 Jul, 2016 12:41 pm
@sky123,
1. what are you trying to determine?

2. no , that phrase/sentence does not make sense. What are you trying to say?
sky123
 
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Reply Tue 12 Jul, 2016 09:10 am
@ehBeth,
Oh thank you ehBeth
I was disappointed to find my answer. thank uuuu
1- first I want to know that in this sentence: "I wonder if you let me know if you have a vacancy" using two if is not kind of Inglish? I mean is it grammatically correct?
and then my second question that is more important to me:
2- usually bachelor of science takes 8 term to complete. But I excelled and got it in 7 terms and straightly qualified for master of science. I want to bring it in my resume (as a PhD applicant) . I am confused how to write it briefly. could you please possibly help me!!
thank you deeply.
ehBeth
 
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Reply Tue 12 Jul, 2016 09:36 am
@sky123,
What kind of vacancy are you asking about? apartment/hotel/what?

What do you mean by straightly qualified? that's not terminology used here
sky123
 
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Reply Tue 12 Jul, 2016 09:37 am
@ehBeth,
and moreover in the first sentence I am trying to ask a professor whether he has a vacancy for me or not. I mean a PhD position. what is your opinion about this sentence?
"I wonder if you could possibly let me know if you have an open PhD position."
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sky123
 
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Reply Tue 12 Jul, 2016 09:43 am
@ehBeth,
vacancy : open PhD position
Straightly qualified: I passed the MS exam one term sooner than what I was supposed to. for many it takes 8 terms to complete BS and 2 terms to prepare themselves for MS exam but for me the whole this process took 7 terms. can you help me briefly state it?
ehBeth
 
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Reply Tue 12 Jul, 2016 10:00 am
@sky123,
Okay. Sounds like your academic system is quite different from what we see in North America. There is no general MS exam, and people don't usually write to ask about PdD spots.

I'll take another look at your sentences with your clarifications in mind.
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ehBeth
 
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Reply Tue 12 Jul, 2016 10:11 am
@sky123,
Please let me know if you have any openings in your PhD program.

I completed my BS and the MS exam within 7 terms.
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ehBeth
 
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Reply Tue 12 Jul, 2016 10:16 am
@sky123,
our grad program application process looks like this (one university example)

https://www.uoguelph.ca/graduatestudies/future/applying-guelph

you apply online
no enquiry letters etc
sky123
 
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Reply Wed 13 Jul, 2016 12:34 pm
@ehBeth,
Thanks from deep my heart.
I hope see you again.
You are a beautiful flower.
Actually I thought it is better to firstly speak with professors of different universities and find a suitable vacancy and then apply for the university.
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sky123
 
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Reply Wed 13 Jul, 2016 12:56 pm
@sky123,
and one more question please.
somebody remarked me that it is better to start formal requests with: "I wonder if you......". But I saw you simply said:" please let me know..."
Is it better not to start requests with " I wonder if you... ". I feel it is too formal!
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