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Reply Tue 6 Sep, 2016 11:28 am
As I am not sure if the statement below is having sense or not, please let me know you opinion or suggestions how to change but still keep a similar semnification.

"Enjoy while cycling and testing new things!"

Many thanks!
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Reply Tue 6 Sep, 2016 11:36 am
@sorin-ioan,
The easiest fix would be "Enjoy yourself while cycling and testing new things".
sorin-ioan
 
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Reply Tue 6 Sep, 2016 11:38 am
@roger,
Many thanks for suggestion, I am going to consider that.

Sorin
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Tue 6 Sep, 2016 11:47 am
@sorin-ioan,
Sorin, it's not. I don't know about the grammar but meaning isn't clear. There are about 8 different interpretations; for instance enjoy your candy bar not only when cycling but also when testing new things...

...in response to an inquiry to your superiors howe much you like a certain candy while riding your bike and therefore whether it would be okay also whilst testing a new product off the production line

I suspect it means something like, "Enjoy your recent status while cycling and testing those new products"


Edited to remark, as Rog's OP above also suggests
sorin-ioan
 
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Reply Wed 7 Sep, 2016 11:15 am
@dalehileman,
Hi Dale,

Many thanks for explanation and suggestion

It was somehow obvious that was not correct and because I was not able to improve the statement I've asked here.

I haven't understood your last statement, "Edited to remark, as....", is Roger's option ok?


dalehileman
 
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Reply Wed 7 Sep, 2016 11:24 am
@sorin-ioan,
Quote:
"Edited to remark, as....", is Roger's option ok?
Yes and forgive me Loan for the incomplete sentence. Often I save before proofreading, a terrible habit

... it means ...."Enjoy ... while cycling and testing... as Rog's OP above also suggests
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