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Reply Thu 9 Sep, 2004 08:37 pm
hello im new here that last time i posted a poem i was banned from another sigth that i will not say name. but only for a week lol. so i came here i know i'm not that good a wrigthing but i never heard bad thing's about what i wrote some even said it was powerful. well you see what that got me . lol just for being to deep. it hurt's it was like my home but maybe this will become my new home just ain't feeling it rigth now or i would wrigth one of my poem's. just want to feel welcomed.
this time i want to do good and be a good man a chance to do rigth once aging . this time with out head ack's yhea admin's i can be a nigthmare but i swear to you that this is a place of new beging's may i make this into my new home.

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Reply Sat 11 Sep, 2004 12:22 pm
Congrats n welcome here i m new 2 n i think this site is WONDERFUL!! Smile
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Reply Sat 11 Sep, 2004 02:06 pm
so nice to meet a new friend lol.
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Reply Sat 11 Sep, 2004 10:35 pm
HARDCOR MARDER
so here we are aging.
do you know what you have done.
no no you never will know.
try as you may to try to steel my voice away.
but i can't help but say.

thank you friend.
so i trun the other cheek and.
offer it the same.
as the good book would say.

but in time i say.
i to will learn to look away.
for a day has come to pass.
this day shale pass the same.

subjected to your truth and your lie's.
but then aging arnt we all.
for you must think i am but a fool.
well just between me and you.

i fear but alas you migth have something new to say.
but in time my sweet prey.
pray for thy own forgiveness.
befor thy ask of they.

lest that thy has judged.
thy shale be judged by thy own judgement.
redeem thy will and they shale be saved.

o sweet friend of mine in thy eye's.
i hold no such hatered for you.
so you cast me aside and asunder.
but my word's shale live on.

in thy heart clogged with thy own bitter life.
surely i must say there will be a day.
a day of redeeming thy own hide.
and the world shale not hide thy own blood ridden hand.

for i am but one.
a lilly in the field.
soon my root's will take hold.
and then i shale be many more yet to be told.
so now i just thank you my long time friend.


hope you all get the true meening behind this one something you migth not have know
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