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Harsh words, opinions and poetry..... A kinder way of talking?

 
 
Reply Thu 7 Apr, 2016 06:32 am
You cannot argue with the deluded so I write "poetry"


One sunny day in the middle of the night
An imaginary God awoke to put things right
He said the things that couldn't be heard
And did the things that couldn't be done
A deaf man remembered every sound
And a blind man wrote down every word

If you believe these lies are true
Puff out your chest and smile at the world
For you are good, moral and true
In the minds of those as deluded as you




Will this work? probably not...

Do you have any?
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Smileyrius
 
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Reply Fri 8 Apr, 2016 03:55 am
@Lionel1020,
One fish
two fish
Red fish
Jew Fish
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onevoice
 
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Reply Fri 8 Apr, 2016 07:16 am
@Lionel1020,
There once was a man
Who sat under an old Apple tree
He was all alone
So he cried, "Oh poor me!"

The sun, it set
So gloriously in the sky
As that poor lonely man
Sat alone and cried

The silence was soon filled
With crickets all around
Frogs croaking loudly
Yet he couldn't hear those sounds

The sky filled with stars
And the moonlight... So bright
So much beauty around
On this dark lonely night

He couldn't see a thing
Through those pitiful tears
He couldn't hear nature's call
Through those "Oh poor me" ears

The sunrise came with splendor
Bringing hope for a new day
Yet this poor pitiful man
Was just too busy crying his life away
mark noble
 
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Reply Fri 8 Apr, 2016 10:05 am
@onevoice,
Nice.
An optimist and pessimist stare toward the same sunset - The optimist stands, agape, before a magnificent setting sun - Amber and rose hues gush over the fluffy, bold cirrostratus on the shimmering horizon.
whilst The pessimist frowns
At the prospect of rain.
onevoice
 
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Reply Fri 8 Apr, 2016 10:28 am
@mark noble,
Ahhhh Mark. You sparkle like a diamond in the light. Smile It is the most glorious thing I have ever seen. So refreshing. Thank you Mark. You have truly touched my heart. Smile
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