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Need advice on my bullet points.

 
 
Evan918
 
Reply Fri 4 Dec, 2015 12:56 am
Hi,
I am not a native speaker, so I am really confused about how to express one of my bullet points.
I was an intern in an investment bank and were responsible for creating the bond offering statement(prospectus).
I calculated the financial indicator from the data I collected.
The best way I could come up with is "Assisted in making bond offering statement by calculating the financial indicators".
Can you give me some suggestions, please?
Thanks in advance.
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Reply Fri 4 Dec, 2015 06:55 am
@Evan918,
Don't use words like 'assisted', 'helped' or 'aided' in your resume. Your title and level of experience makes it pretty obvious you worked on a team and didn't do this on your own.

Also, lead with you did, and end with why you did it. To wit -

* Calculated financial indicators used in making bond offering statements
Evan918
 
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Reply Fri 4 Dec, 2015 07:07 pm
@jespah,
Thanks so much!
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