eeevasu
 
Reply Sat 27 Dec, 2014 05:29 am
1. the last project of the company was equally as successful as the first project.

2.my father wanted to know that i had done all the work assigned to me.
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contrex
 
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Reply Sat 27 Dec, 2014 06:05 am
@eeevasu,
The company's last project was as successful as its first.

My father wanted to know whether I had done all the work assigned to me.
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Reply Sat 27 Dec, 2014 06:17 am
@contrex,
I don't think there were any errors in his /her sentences other than a lack of capitals.
I thought the error to be corrected was a first time poster treating the board like an app into which you can input a sentence without a please or thank you and assume we'll spurt it back out with corrections.
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contrex
 
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Reply Sat 27 Dec, 2014 06:36 am
I agree about the lack of capitals, and I think the sentences were somewhat clumsy. Excessive repetition of "project" in the first one, and also "equally" is redundant in "equally as successful".
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