milimi
 
Reply Sun 21 Dec, 2014 01:15 pm
Hello,

Could you please help me and tell me if this text for a christmas card is correct:

"May the magic of Christmas lingers over your home!
May this fest be rich for you of family joys and happiness of being together!
May your dearest wishes come true!
Merry christmas!"

Thank you, have a good day.
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roger
 
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Reply Sun 21 Dec, 2014 02:58 pm
@milimi,
No 's' at the end of 'linger'.

'fest' is okay but 'holiday' would be better.

Again, 'dearest' is correct, but 'fondest' just sounds better.
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