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A Poem Dedicated to how beautiful I think 18 year old girls are to me.

 
 
Reply Thu 20 Nov, 2014 07:51 pm
How Beautiful You Are

Like a woman I could never deny
More beautiful than the sky
Like a bird with beautiful wings
Represents something that makes my heart fly

I would only show love
That comes from a true heart
From a man that
Nevers tells you to depart

Only you I love
More than you'll ever know
More than I could
Ever know how to tell

Love never dies
Especially when it comes to you
Because your beauty and you
Will never leave my heart.
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jespah
 
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Reply Thu 20 Nov, 2014 07:56 pm
@Rock7000,
How old are you?
Rock7000
 
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Reply Thu 20 Nov, 2014 08:00 pm
@jespah,
I'm 26.
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knaivete
 
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Reply Thu 20 Nov, 2014 09:56 pm
@jespah,
Quote:
How old are you?


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Rock7000
 
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Reply Thu 20 Nov, 2014 09:57 pm
I'm 26.
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knaivete
 
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Reply Thu 20 Nov, 2014 09:57 pm
@Rock7000,
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bobsal u1553115
 
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Reply Tue 2 Dec, 2014 05:48 pm
Wow. 26. Thats a bit creepy. 18 year old girls, eh? Yep, that's a bit creepy.
roger
 
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Reply Tue 2 Dec, 2014 06:02 pm
@bobsal u1553115,
Some of them look pretty good to me, too. Before you ask, I'm 70.
bobsal u1553115
 
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Reply Thu 4 Dec, 2014 08:20 am
@roger,
Looking is one thing, writing multiple, obsessive and badly written poems is a bit creepy.
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Verlor
 
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Reply Mon 15 Dec, 2014 02:11 am
This is a wonderful poem. Are you in love with 18 year old girl?
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