1
   

Grammar question

Forums: Poetry, English, Esl, Grammar
Email this Topic • Print this Page
 
 
1jane1
 
Reply Sat 7 Jun, 2014 07:42 pm
Poetry line:

I'm the only married one,
No kids and an unemployed one

Is grammar good? tx)

  • Topic Stats
  • Top Replies
  • Link to this Topic
Type: Question • Score: 1 • Views: 769 • Replies: 2
No top replies

 
knaivete
 
  1  
Reply Sat 7 Jun, 2014 11:31 pm
@1jane1,
Try an edit.

The syntax in line 2 is too unusual.

Poetry often involves metre, foot and rhyme.
1jane1
 
  1  
Reply Sun 8 Jun, 2014 12:37 am
@knaivete,
agreed. all fixed now Smile tx!
0 Replies
 
 

Related Topics

Poims - Favrits - Discussion by edgarblythe
Poetry Wanted: Seasons of a2k. - Discussion by tsarstepan
What are the three best poems ever written and why? - Question by iamsam82
"Patriotism Is The Virtue Of The Viscious..." - Question by mark noble
Night Blooms - Discussion by qwertyportne
It floated there..... - Discussion by Letty
Who is the best contemporary poet in your opinion? - Question by zhjuan
Allen Ginsberg - Discussion by edgarblythe
"Alone" by Edgar Allan Poe - Discussion by Gouki
I'm looking for a poem by Hughes Mearns - Discussion by unluckystar
Spontaneous Poems - Discussion by edgarblythe
 
  1. Forums
  2. » Grammar question
Copyright © 2024 MadLab, LLC :: Terms of Service :: Privacy Policy :: Page generated in 0.06 seconds on 12/22/2024 at 04:05:09
▲ ▼