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Mon 3 May, 2004 05:53 pm
hi all...well...ill post some of my lyrics to see wat yall think iv been writing since last summer and have over 20 songs almost finished
well im gonna go check out some stuff on this board...ttyl
one of my songs is in ORIGINAL WRITING
Well, I read through your new song. It seems a little, um, dark and angry.
Oh, no. A dark and angry rocker? What will they think of next?
edgar, more dark and angry than most.
I couldn't find the lyrics. Don't know what I could be doing wrong.
Nemind. I finded it. Could you drop the inhibitions and tell us how you really feel, Mike?
That song was written for the people that i hate especially at school.....and my band is more of a Metal Band than rock...so the lyrics fit the metal style...i have more songs...ill post some more later
I was thinking, Mike; maybe you could try writing a little more like this:
Mary sunshine.
When I was a tiny tot
Of maybe two or three
I can still remember what
My mother said to me...
Place rose colored glasses on your nose
And you will see the robins
Not the crows
For in the tense and tangled web
Our weary lives can weave
You're so much better off
If you believe....
That there's a little bit of good
In everyone
In everyone you'll ever know
Yes, there's a little bit of good
In everyone
Though many times, it doesn't show
It only takes the the taking time
with one another
For under every mean veneer
Is someone warm and dear
Keep looking....
For that bit of good in everyone
The ones we call bad
Are never all bad
So try to find that little bit of good
Is someone warm and dear
Keep looking...
For that little bit of good in everyone
Although you meet rats
They're not complete rats
So try to find that little bit of good!
When I was young, heavy metal wasn't death metal. Death metal didn't really exist. Infected, do you listen to Black Sabbath? Even Iron Maiden isn't that deathish.
no i dont listen to Black Sabbath.......i listen to bands like Mushroomhead...mudvayne...slipknot....motograter....and bands like them
and to edgardlythe...i dont write songs that sound like a boy band AKA Good Charlotte...i write songs with REAL emotion...wat ever i feel i write
ill post some more songs later tonight
I Just Posted a New song called THE MIND...in Original Writing
Infectedmike, I like your songs. You are displaying true, raw emotion, and it's good that you're shocking -- that's the point of rock-and-roll in all its evolutionary forms. True?
Also, this is a healthy way to get out those feelings. People have done it for centuries in all art forms.
I don't think Infectedmike's 'shocking' song is out of line with what metal bands are writing today. It reminded me a little of the stuff Disturbed writes.