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UW diversiy essay

 
 
Reply Mon 25 Nov, 2013 07:59 pm
I would like to know of anything I could add or change to make my essay better, this is a very important school for me.

I live in a town called Monroe here in Washington, but I go to school in Snohomish. Both towns are diversely different. I was transferred from a Monroe private elementary school, to a public middle school in Snohomish. If I had gone to school in Monroe High School like I was suppose to I would not be as diverse of a person I am now. Back when I was in seventh grade I would have said that I hated making new friends, and starting over. It’s hard to create relationships with new people.
The feel, people, and the experiences I’ve had in both towns are different. Being exposed to both these different environments gives me a better hold on what diversity truly means. Diversity is people with different ideas, backgrounds, and cultures. It’s about whom you are, not just what you put on paper or say out loud. This is about sharing who you really are, your passions, talents, and open mind. I have made friends of all races and beliefs.
I am so glad that I came to Snohomish; the people are what make the town such a wonderful place. A cute little antique town, I never knew would change me so much. We are the most spirited school in western Washington four years in a row. The people of Snohomish make this a possibility. Generosity and courtesy are not traits that are to be sought out, but are already shown in the people. I long to meet others and expand my knowledge as well as share my own culture and experiences.
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Reply Mon 25 Nov, 2013 09:38 pm
@swimmergirl415,
I live in Edmonds and I'm older than most rocks. You have a few minor spelling and grammatical mistakes; but I am sure you can correct those before you turn in the essay.

Is location truly the cause of your growing concept of diversity? Folks are great here in Edmonds as they also are in Duvall, Concrete, Bellingham, and Edison, New Jersey. Could you dig a little deeper?
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Reply Tue 26 Nov, 2013 08:22 am
@swimmergirl415,
Diversely different really doesn't mean anything. I think what you mean is that the towns have differing types of populations.

You define diversity as people with different ideas, backgrounds, and cultures. And that's more or less correct. But you completely misuse the term in your first sentence where you say I would not be as diverse of a person I am now.

You do not become a more diverse person, not really. You don't change age (except to get older, but you don't change generation), parentage, ethnic background, race, gender (only with a ton of help) or sexual orientation. About the only things you can change are your religion (or to add one, or to become an atheist, etc.) and your ideas. Your attitude is really the question here. What happens in your head when you meet or hear about people who are different from you?

So, given that, what are the different ideas you've been exposed to in Snohomish? Who are the people of different backgrounds?

Case in point. When I went to college (I started in September of 1979), I had a lovely suitemate who came in from just outside of Providence, Rhode Island. At holiday time, she asked me what I was doing for Christmas, and was surprised when I told her that I don't celebrate it, and that I celebrate Chanukah instead. She told me that I was the first Jewish person she had ever met.

Clearly, she didn't grow up in a terribly diverse town, but she was open to new ideas, tolerant of differences and really, was just kind to everyone (she was and still is one of the sweetest people I have ever known).

So, in Snohomish, do you see folks who are of different races from you (I know it's a rather white area, but not 100%)? Do you see girls wearing hijabs, or boys wearing yarmulkes? When you visit your friends, do they have differing traditions from your family? E. g. do you have Italian friends who maybe have a lasagna at Thanksgiving, or Catholic friends who have invited you to a Midnight Mass on Christmas Eve?

How much has living in Snohomish done for you, in terms of showing you people who don't look, eat, pray, speak, love or eat like you do?
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