12.5 bars, 5.21 guns

If anyone needs to find the meaning of the words misogynistic or moronic, just read the preceding post.

What does that have to do with my rap

14 years old and you write nasty stuff like that, and you're actually PROUD of it!

Have you shown this stuff to your parents? Would you show it to your grandma?



That you are a budding misogynist is obvious, and the fact that you don't see that this verse is really quite worrying sort of illustrates my second observation as well.

Yes considering its about how I don't want to be involved with the wrong side of the industry and want to say on the right path

Maybe your message sort of gets lost in all the mindless swearing, bad rhyming and latent aggression.

It's not done buddy. At that particular time I was try to get my mind off things because my life is kinda fucked up right now. But still, if you read it thoroughly there is plenty of meaning.

If you seriously want to say(stay?) on the right path, why not try writing something without the usual swear words and leave out the word "bitch".

Oh, and cut the aggressive tone. Three lines in and I was thinking "moron". I bet there were others who dipped in and shot out again, thinking the self same thing.

You're obviously reasonably intelligent. Why try to come across as the usual gangsta idiot? They're ten a penny, unfortunately.

I'd like to start with, **** this, rough bitch (as in when you screw the music it's like screwing a woman)
Up on the love bench, gut this, dumb ****
Like a big-ass gup fish (gut the women who objectify themselves as if you were gutting a fish. Yes, violent)
Gotta stay in your school, still playin the fool (stay in school, and still pay attention)
Stop talkin like rap is an illuminatic tool (today everyone is saying rap music is "illuminatic"
Damn, they don't exist, face it bitch (illuminati died out 200 years ago)
But you can cause you look the wrong way misfit (you don't pay attention to the good things, only to what society has to say)
I threw a screwball and you must miss it
Or it'll be a junkball and you'll surely get hit (if you were to try to go for it, you'd get hurt. Reference to baseball as well)
This is quick ****, runs to home and quick splits (another baseball reference)
Off on my own, but they say I need a slick bitch, big tits (people think you need bitches and his to be a cool famous rapper)
Two mil and a big dick, to get **** (and money and *ahem* a sizable appendage)
**** that I'm no rapper like that (I don't want that)
I'm a rockstar on a cop car (I break the rules in my own ways)
**** the system, no protection to stop hard, got far (nothing to save me, but I keep going)
Off of a guitar, and 12 bars (I started with a guitar and one rap verse)
I'm done with this wicked winnin and no frickin shipment (I'm done winning and getting nothing from it)
I ain't gettin women ain't no livin in em (I won't be having sex with all the women I see)
I'd be pinned and written (get in a fight)
Before pinned and ridden (raped/have sex)
So bitches listen get your little tips an' (gather the money you make from ho business)
Put em in this big bin, so you can buy clothes and wear em (they objectify themselves)
This ain't no harem quite comparin (there's no real competitions to be had, slow down)
Life is rare don't live it bare (a reference to the previous line)
Where's your parents? Get a life and solemnly swear it! (What would their parents think of what they've done? Make an oath to live life the right way)