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Reply Tue 26 Mar, 2013 12:24 pm
I picked the sentences below out of a fiction book. I'm trying to improve my grammar, and I like to know why there know conjunction between the two clauses. Shouldn't there be a conjunction between nightmare and the?

Jacob wished he could wake up from this nightmare, the one he was living, but this was no delusion.
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Frank Apisa
 
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Reply Tue 26 Mar, 2013 12:40 pm
@learning100,
Can't comment authoritatively on that...but the second "know" in your second sentence should be "no."

Gotta be careful with that if you want to improve your grammar.
roger
 
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Reply Tue 26 Mar, 2013 12:45 pm
@learning100,
No. It is the same nightmare. That is, the nightmare he was having is also the one he is was living.

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learning100
 
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Reply Tue 26 Mar, 2013 11:38 pm
@Frank Apisa,
Thank you, Frank and Roger. I know that I have a lot to learn, and I appreciate the help.
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Setanta
 
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Reply Wed 27 Mar, 2013 03:07 am
"But" is a conjunction.
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JTT
 
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Reply Wed 27 Mar, 2013 12:52 pm
@Frank Apisa,
Quote:
Gotta be careful with that if you want to improve your grammar.


Spelling has nothing to do with grammar, Frank.
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JTT
 
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Reply Wed 27 Mar, 2013 12:53 pm
@learning100,
Jacob wished he could wake up from this nightmare, which was the one he was living, but this was no delusion.
dalehileman
 
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Reply Wed 27 Mar, 2013 05:57 pm
@JTT,
Forgive me JTT but for some reason I like it better without
JTT
 
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Reply Wed 27 Mar, 2013 07:53 pm
@dalehileman,
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Forgive me JTT but for some reason I like it better without


There's no need to apologize for your preferences, Dale.

My offering,

Jacob wished he could wake up from this nightmare, which was the one he was living, but this was no delusion.

was not an endorsement for my stylistic preference. Those are pretty much useless to ESLs. They need to, and want to, understand the underlying structure.

I know that that was the way English was taught when you and I were young 'uns but it was only done that way because the vast vast vast majority of English teachers didn't know their verbs from a pennywhistle.
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MontereyJack
 
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Reply Wed 27 Mar, 2013 08:54 pm
I liked the original better too. "which was" was unnecessary and made the sentence clunky.
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