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JTG198904
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Wed 6 Feb, 2013 06:49 am
There's gotta be hope in the ashes
in the flaky corpse of nicotine
war against breathing
from the dry bleeding lungs
a phoenix sings
and flies through tobacco clouds
Stumble It!
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PUNKEY
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Wed 6 Feb, 2013 09:29 am
Wish you would have said:
There no hope in the ashes
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JTG198904
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Tue 12 Feb, 2013 04:44 am
@PUNKEY,
I would have said that if I was 100% certain there wasn't any hope.
I am not.
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lillyandrew
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Fri 23 Aug, 2013 05:03 am
@JTG198904,
True & nice liked it.
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lillyandrew
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Mon 9 Sep, 2013 03:43 am
@JTG198904,
I liked it nice work.
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Abishai100
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Thu 14 Nov, 2013 03:02 pm
@JTG198904,
The Baroness was a smuggler,
She supplied euphoria to a groom and bride,
stole the groom,
and became a jailer.
A chef wandered into the scene,
He proposed a wager for pies,
created the best pie,
and all who ate became wailers.
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