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'One Letter Too Many'

 
 
jjorge
 
Reply Wed 13 Apr, 2011 06:58 am
(to Ms. J.)

If I were your
armor

I'd feel fine.

You're already mine.

Shaped to your shape,
my spaces

-all the old familiar
places-

You won't have to dress
in camo,

and, if you need some,
I've got ammo:

te amo, te amo

-jjorge
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jjorge
 
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Reply Wed 13 Apr, 2011 07:00 am
a silly 'crush' poem I wrote several years ago
mags314772
 
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Reply Wed 13 Apr, 2011 07:22 am
@jjorge,
love it
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msolga
 
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Reply Sat 16 Apr, 2011 01:52 am
@jjorge,
Nice, very nice, jjorge.
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dlowan
 
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Reply Sat 16 Apr, 2011 02:15 am
@jjorge,
Lovely!!!!
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jjorge
 
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Reply Sat 16 Apr, 2011 03:33 pm
mags, msolga, dlowan Thanks all!

Hope it gave you a smile!

armor/amor.....ammo/amo -my obsessive little mind works like that. :-)
ossobuco
 
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Reply Sat 16 Apr, 2011 05:14 pm
@jjorge,
enjoyed that one, jorge.
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Sat 16 Apr, 2011 05:15 pm
@jjorge,
The good kind of obsession..
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