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I want some advice on the song I'm writing it's kind of soul/r&b (it's just the intro).

 
 
Reply Thu 24 Feb, 2011 10:17 am
Now it's just a memorie. Lost within my head. And I can't pretend that itll be alright. So I hold on tight, to the times we had. But in the distance I see the light guiding me through this godaweful fight.
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Reply Thu 24 Feb, 2011 10:24 am
How about:

Just a memory
lost in my head.
Can't pretend to be alright.
So I hold on tight,
to all we had.
Looking for a light
to guide me through the night.
Areyes11
 
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Reply Thu 24 Feb, 2011 10:34 am
@PUNKEY,
Where can I go from there?
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Reply Thu 24 Feb, 2011 11:09 am
You said this is the intro . . .

So . . .keep writing and composing.

It will all come together for you if you let it just come out.
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