@parados,
Quote:Neither of your paraphrases in any way imply that it isn't good editing solely BECAUSE it isn't editing.
Your contention, and I quote, and underline,
Quote:"if it can even be considered editing" in no way affects the meaning of the first phrase.
is what's at issue. Not your latest scrambling, whacko, out of the blue piece of nonsense.
You have this special knack of moving the goalposts with each breath you take, of picking out some obscure bit of nothingness to feast upon as if it's the central issue.
Did you intend that your diagramming of the sentence come as an attachment to your post 'cause I think you forgot to add it?