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The Sacred

 
 
aidan
 
Reply Tue 12 Oct, 2010 02:31 am
I found this poem and it resonated with me:



Quote:
THE SACRED
By Stephen Dunn

After the teacher asked if anyone had
a sacred place
and the students fidgeted and shrunk

in their chairs, the most serious of them all
said it was his car,
being in it alone, his tape deck playing

things he'd chosen, and others knew the truth
had been spoken
and began speaking about their rooms,

their hiding places, but the car kept coming
up, the car in motion,
music filling it, and sometimes one other person

who understood the bright altar of the dashboard
and how far away
a car could take him from the need

to speak, or to answer, the key
in having a key
and putting it in, and going.


It resonated with me because I'd have said the same thing- a car- at night, heater going, heading somewhere with someone you know so well speech is optional.

And then there's this place-the hills above where I live. I can't go there or leave from there without being filled with peace at the knowledge that such space exists for me.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k46/aidan_010/2006-01-08/4370.jpg

Is there a place or space you've found which you consider sacred?
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Reply Wed 20 Oct, 2010 03:35 pm
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k46/aidan_010/weirstream-1.jpg

I Was Born Upon Thy Bank, River
by: Henry David Thoreau

I was born upon thy bank, river,
My blood flows in thy stream,
And thou meanderest forever
At the bottom of my dream.
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Reply Wed 20 Oct, 2010 03:39 pm
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k46/aidan_010/nightharbor-1.jpg

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Variation On The Word Sleep
by Margaret Atwood

I would like to watch you sleeping,
which may not happen.
I would like to watch you,
sleeping. I would like to sleep
with you, to enter
your sleep as its smooth dark wave
slides over my head

and walk with you through that lucent
wavering forest of bluegreen leaves
with its watery sun & three moons
towards the cave where you must descend,
towards your worst fear

I would like to give you the silver
branch, the small white flower, the one
word that will protect you
from the grief at the center
of your dream, from the grief
at the center I would like to follow
you up the long stairway
again & become
the boat that would row you back
carefully, a flame
in two cupped hands
to where your body lies
beside me, and as you enter
it as easily as breathing in

I would like to be the air
that inhabits you for a moment
only. I would like to be that unnoticed
& that necessary.


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aidan
 
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Reply Fri 22 Oct, 2010 03:53 pm
For my father on his birthday:

The moon tonight

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k46/aidan_010/IMG_6873.jpg

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k46/aidan_010/IMG_6872-1.jpg

Clown in the Moon
by Dylan Thomas

My tears are like the quiet drift
Of petals from some magic rose;
And all my grief flows from the rift
Of unremembered skies and snows.

I think, that if I touched the earth,
It would crumble;
It is so sad and beautiful,
So tremulously like a dream.

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