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Back to school

 
 
Lily
 
Reply Wed 18 Aug, 2010 06:36 am
Back to school
Back to trying to be cool
Pretending to listen in class
Tests you really have to pass
Nerdy friends you’re ashamed of
Trying to get attention from the guy you love
Days full of gossip and drama
Backstabbing and bad karma
Parties full of beer and cheap wine
Trying to not step over the line
Doing what popular girls may
Starting the day with a cup earl grey
Laughing with friends in the cafeteria
Always knowing teenaged life might end up in hysteria


What do you guys think? It's not really polished, made it quite quickly. I don't like the last line, but I'm quite proude over the "girls may- earl grey"-rhyme, haha. I just hope everyone knows earl grey is a tea sort Wink
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Caroline
 
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Reply Thu 19 Aug, 2010 06:27 am
@Lily,
I like earl grey. Very nice poem Lily.
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