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Snow Globe

 
 
Reply Sat 14 Aug, 2010 12:00 am
The trains are falling like snowdrops
while we swim on rooftops
(This might be the end,
again) off box and shelf
she holds close to herself
singing darlin'
clementine, oh my
outside church bells
cut through our ears
as heaven turns our gears
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they won't stop till 25.00,
well these clocks they seem right
but not for trains in spiral flight
[and only bubbles hold air]
we lit our stations ablaze
while the sun dug its own grave
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The hands of God shook everything
we know, but at least we know
we're in her odd, old globe

By, <ole
8-14-10
(what do you think? I can't stand it.)
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Caroline
 
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Reply Sat 14 Aug, 2010 12:23 am
@mister kitten,
It's good. Why can't you stand it.
mister kitten
 
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Reply Sat 14 Aug, 2010 07:45 am
@Caroline,
Could be better.
Caroline
 
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Reply Sat 14 Aug, 2010 07:51 am
@mister kitten,
Maybe you think so, I like it, I love how abstract you are.
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