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It floated there.....

 
 
qwertyportne
 
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Reply Thu 24 Jun, 2010 11:38 am
@Letty,
Vivid images and the line breaks give it a pleasing rhythm. The repetition of "ose" connects the various parts of the poem, makes me feel its togetherness. Thanks for posting this...

--Bill
Letty
 
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Reply Thu 24 Jun, 2010 11:47 am
@qwertyportne,
What a delightful surprise. Thank you from all of us here, qwertyportne.
I quess one could call my poem a "....midsummer night's dream..."

Do you think that William Shakespeare would object? Smile
mark noble
 
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Reply Thu 24 Jun, 2010 12:36 pm
@Letty,
Hi Letty,

Do you mean "Francis Bacon"? ha-ha.

xxx
Mark...
Letty
 
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Reply Thu 24 Jun, 2010 01:09 pm
@mark noble,
Smile This Francis, mark?

http://artblart.files.wordpress.com/2008/12/bacon-innocent4.jpg

He's yelling, "Letty may not know anything about geography, but she knows dreams."

...ah, what fools we mortals be....

The cap and bells we don each day,
To see if we have learned to play
The jester.

And when we find ourselves to be
Confronted with eternity
We fester.
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chama fiammetta
 
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Reply Sat 4 Sep, 2010 05:43 pm
@Letty,
despised rose! i like roses.. but i don't like spiders, i hate them. i think its spiders that spun the universe, very big ones, big invisible ones! i wonder what they catch in their beautiful webs? maybe they catch butterflies but i don't know. perhaps the butterflies are invisible too or they have left. i don't think their is gold at the end of a rainbow i think their is irony at the end of a rainbow. anyway your poem is really beautiful. Smile
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msolga
 
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Reply Sat 4 Sep, 2010 05:53 pm
@Letty,
I really loved that, Letty.
Perfect.

(.. though I'm wishing you happier dreams tonight. Smile )
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sean215pdub
 
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Reply Sun 23 Jan, 2011 11:07 pm
@Letty,
alright yo yo yo
your name it letty
be prepared to gett sweaty
after readin these rhymes
your jaws gonna drop and your gonna be himes
sit back
relax
grab a 6 pack
cause i can go all day
they call me seaaaaaaaaaaaaanyyy
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