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Tue 1 Jun, 2010 02:00 pm
The ending is a little corny, but it hits a lot of ideals and concepts that I believe we can all connect with.
I would love any opinions on this excerpt . . .
The reality of life is so epic and scary most of us can't acknowledge the truth in each situation.
Instead of excepting that we are all just ONE we fixate on the disadvantages others have in accordance to our own vitality with out even appreciating the potential they could have in our own reality.
We've only lived our lives, we only know what we know. So together as a whole we may one day truly achieve nirvana.
Instead of fearing or judging everyone else we should combine our talents and work with our failures of the past, because they will only carry on and inevitably solidify the mistakes of yesterday into our every day lives, creating a sense of helplessness or lack of control.
DO NOT stop the world from spinning, but most importantly DO NOT stop others from being themselves: through that world peace is still an attainable gaol.
-Ceylana Lotus
@CeylanaLotus,
Some very nice sentiments.
Welcome to the forum.
There is a creative writing group that just started up that could be of use and you could use.
Check it out we are in the social group area.
Again many welcomes.
Who is the writer you most want to be like?
@CeylanaLotus,
Welcome to Philforum!
I hope you will at some time expand on your thinking, and join in the many interesting conversations found in the threads.
Regards,
John
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