WHY!!!!

I like this poem. The only thing that I would change is the fact that you retaliate in the poem, sort of. The lines But when you think about it you have fat to the stupid line are not really needed. If you take them out then your meaning has more power. But it is good.

I like the fat stupid line. Try to hear this poem when someone is screaming at someone else like a girlfriend to her boyfriend. BubblesGirl13 is meerly speaking her mind. I think its wonderful. Here are some of my own poems. (may be deppressing)

May I Get Pills For That?

Happy Pain. You lower your head with blissful pain. The pictures on the wall die away. The world is insane. Break these chains of life that bind me. This time you will not have it your way.

Paranoia. Don't oversleep. Stay in the restful world of paradise that you call your bed. They'll never understand me. The clock is the tool of the devil. How will he use it? Wake up into the world of paranoia.

Blind Man. You cannot see. You are a blind man. Beneath the glasses lie the worlds of truth. You paint your pretty toenails. You are beautiful. You live in their world. You are a puppet. Dance.