Sorry for the delay in my response. I've been out on a job, and didn't have time to get back to the message board. Some interesting stuff has kick up here though. Thanks.
INT. DORM - AFTERNOON
Erin is standing in front of a bed on one side of the room; Sandy is sitting on a bed on the other.
One day, Greg told me the girl next door in his dorm had herpes.
I asked him how he knew...
He 'kind-of' said he’d seen it.
I never thought he’d be dumb enough to be boning her.
Two weeks later, he had it.
I hadn't slept with him since he'd said anything,
But a week later I had it.
Sandy steps up off the bed.
Here's some of it.
I think I know where I'm going after this I'm going to talk about how it effects her relationships. She'll say telling new friends isn't that bad because it's just setting a new expectations; but telling an old friend is difficult.
Also her relationship with Greg is up for grabs whatever makes this dialogue more interesting. Maybe she was going to break up with him before she even heard about the herpes. She was waiting until after Valentines day (because that'd be weird and then she got herpes.) Or maybe they were madly in love and then she got herpes. Honestly I hate the description of how she got herpes. So everything I pasted in I want changed to whatever/anything that makes it better.