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Something new, someplace old.
Run from the trapping pain of a past so cold.
Finding relief in the people surrounding,
as the scream of helplessness echos resounding.

Things will get better, I promised this once,
I promise still, just wait a few months.
The dew on the leaves drop to the ground,
as my worries fall all around.

I'm changing, your changing, becoming anew,
let us leave our old memories few.
Let's write the history, write you a song,
Write in a diary about where you belong.

Make you happy, keep you content,
get you a puppy with your parents consent.
Paint you a sky, a sky of colors so dear.
Forever in my arms, nothing to fear.

Here I wait, here I stay,
Until that patiently awaited day.
A future so bright, a future so needed,
we still have a bit left, our soal still unreceaded.

As a fog decends and the sun hides away,
please wont you tell me that you are going to stay.
Something so perfect for someone so broken,
once my luck appears outspoken.

I can see the road clearly ahead,
but I'll take a path to you instead.
This path a bit hazy, seeming unknown,
but I'll see first hand how much beauty shone.

For you I will struggle to find my way,
only just for you will I wander this fray.
I don't know how far I have yet to go,
but through my journey, my love for you will surely show.

Your troubled by much which I cannot see,
but in this hardship there will always be me.
There are so many things I wish I could do,
like sit in the grass watching the night sky with you.

Someone old, feelings anew,
girl I'd do anything just to see you.
This tortured night, screaming to space,
though into your inbox was never the place.

I cry to be so seperated,
as that few weeks when "I" so dearly contimplated.
I cry alone, for you do not know,
that some of m tears never come to show.

My heart is breaking, though you cannot see,
everytime "Hello?" is sent back to me,
I wish it weren't so, I wish it so much.
I feel everything tremble at your slightest touch.

I want to hold your hand so dear,
hold me close, wash away the fear.
I want to stroke your cheek with the palm of my hand,
as we sit and admire the warmth of the sand.

Baby I love you, wont you please say the same,
so I can be sure this isn't some cruel little game.
You're burried in my chest, it's where you belong,
and inside my head, your laughter, my favorite song.

I wish you were here, I miss you something terrible,
every second of seperation is almost unbearable.
I scribble this down with a tear in my eye,
the scribbles of a heart filled with fear still denied.

I lie awake wishing I were there to watch you fall asleep,
just one memory, the rise and fall of your breathing to keep.
Your beautiful eyes, hidden under the viel of dream,
so very calm and peaceful your figure would seem.

Seeing your wonderful smile warms me inside,
as I wonder what thoughts of happiness reside.
At the end of the day when I am stripped to my past shame,
in my suprise, you won't let me take my blame.

I do not fully understand why you would choose me,
I'm nothing too special as far as I can see.
But I'm not one to complain over my blessings,
we are fixing eachother, to grievences you are my dressings.

You are my everything, anything for you,
a walk in the park, a movie, a table just for two.
Every second apart a painful throb,
every day without you a crying sob.

Why must we wait, I don't understand,
of the happiness to come, why repremand?
If not today, if not tomorrow,
when will we end this hanging sorrow?

The sun has met the hill tops, a sun so brightly shining,
in all vastness of the horizon, your beauty kept confining.
I wish I could walk away,
from everything but you today.

Let us run free,
just you and just me,
let us run from all tomorrow,
to a land that binds no sorrow.

There we will forget about the past,
amd make new memories to last.
There we will write about today,
and think about tomorrow with seldom the words to say.

Bring me home, take me away,
take this chance, seize this day.
The chilly air settles to the ground,
as the fiery leaves fall all around.

As the seasons change, so do you,
my life, my feelings renew.
This time has come,
why now, where from?

Getting caught on the lake in the wind and the rain,
now our affection showing so plain.
Running from the cars around the bend,
my broken heart has already begun to mend.

Can I fix you as you have fixed me?
Can I break your chains away, and leave you free?
Whatever the cost, I'll do it for you.
This feeling inside, a feeling so true.

Later that day, you told me dear,
exactly what I had been waiting to hear.
Our following embrace replays in my head,
with that lovely phrase that day that you said.

Times have changed, I like the new,
I like my new found future starting with you.
I do the best I can at being what you want me to be,
because to the doors in my heart, only you possess a key.

I can't get your touch out of my head.
I stay up late pondering the things you have said.
I now see how much I've changed on this upward trek,
how far I've come for you, remembered around my neck.

Around my neck is a symbol deserved,
and when the time should come, it yours, unreserved.
Half the length of the chain is the distance from my heart,
when we are apart, wearing my heart upon yours is a start.

It is then that I'll always be there,
it is then you'll know how much I can care.
As we grow older and the metals fade,
listen in your heart for my sweet serenade.