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Ode To The Movie "Red Cliff"

Twilight & moonlight grind no more,
Wave after wave wash toward shore.

Listen to the Gong Jin admiral roars,
With iron horses and golden swords.

When knights proved their bright.
Triple Kingdoms started to fight.

Blowing monsoon was fanning infernal.
Burning battleships sank into channels.

Often tragedy survive hence revive,
Often flowers open to improvise.

Dress up and walk the floor,
Stunning Bridge bride we adore!

When spouses sing comforting folklore,
Our millennium legend will restore.

Neither sunset nor farms,
Could conceal her charms.

Many a tear come and dry,
Many a tide rise and die.

When their ambition rose,
Spring will treasure most.

Sky go high, rivers grow wide
When lovers' romance expire.

We sadly await our time to die
But not until our watery guest arrive .

Graying hair already shines,
But where to get their replies?

Then music will temporary relay
On fruitless ambitions to go haywire.