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All Is Not

 
 
Reply Sun 5 Apr, 2009 10:35 pm
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Our Obligation: To forget fairness,
In war, in love, unless we: The victors.

Embarrassingly employing the most ironic of methods:
Mouthing and Muttering over and over what we know is false,
Ad nauseum, we purchase the pitiful lie we sell ourselves.

Never challenging the wise with the wisdom we aren't supposed to have.
Or want. Or care about. Be about.
Believe as I do, doing more than just accepting the convention: A duty.

Free to fashion the contrarian's clothes.
If you like the look, you can tailor them in time.
Dare to ignite and inspire some overdue discomfort,
Achieve amorous adoration for your audacity.

All was never fair in love and war.
Too many lost wars, lost lovers.
Yet, our response: recite the lie; repeat.
A chorus for cowards too afraid to just ask for what they deserve:

A whole world.
An ethical earth.

Be furious, we deserve it. Please, purge.
Mourn, but make sober self. Resolve.

It is the war we wage, unwillingly.
It is our love we labor, and loses its color in patience.
Help us, that our hurt is humanized, honored.

Fair in love and war, all is NOT
Error, an excuse from equity

From my blog... I haven't been writing as much lately.

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Diest TKO
 
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Reply Sun 5 Apr, 2009 11:56 pm
@Diest TKO,
Code:
...TTTTT...K...K....OOO....
.....T.....K..K....O...O...
.....T.....KKK.....O...O...
.....T.....K..K....O...O...
.....T.....K...K....OOO....
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Reply Mon 6 Apr, 2009 03:59 am
@Diest TKO,
TKO, that is a powerful poem. For some reason the pharase "...tailored in time.." leapt out. Thanks, my techie friend from Virginia. Don't stop writing.
Diest TKO
 
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Reply Mon 6 Apr, 2009 06:58 am
@Letty,
Hey thanks!

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