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Rites of Passage?

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Wed 24 Sep, 2003 06:33 am
William Stafford is one of my favorite poets and the following poem seems to be his summation of the rites of passage for a young man:

Fifteen
South of the bridge on Seventeenth
I found back of the willows one summer
day a motorcycle with engine running
as it lay on its side, ticking over
slowly in the high grass. I was fifteen.

I admired all that pulsing gleam, the
shiny flanks, the demure headlights
fringed where it lay; I led it gently
to the road, and stood with that
companion, ready and friendly. I was fifteen.

We could find the end of a road, meet
the sky on out Seventeenth. I thought about
hills, and patting the handle got back a
confident opinion. On the bridge we indulged
a forward feeling, a tremble. I was fifteen.

Thinking, back farther in the grass I found
the owner, just coming to, where he had flipped
over the rail. He had blood on his hand, was pale-
I helped him walk to his machine. He ran his hand
over it, called me good man, roared away.

I stood there, fifteen.

--William Stafford

Do you see something different within the context?
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JoanneDorel
 
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Reply Sat 27 Sep, 2003 08:56 am
Yes perhaps the motorcycle was a woman and this is a desciption of first sex - men and mototcycles how manly is that?
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 27 Sep, 2003 09:07 am
Wow, Joanne. I never thought about that. I was thinking more along the lines of a boy being a man when he had wheels...but, in retrospect, I suppose the reason a boy wants wheels is to attract the female of the species. Hmmmmmmmm.
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JoanneDorel
 
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Reply Sat 27 Sep, 2003 11:14 am
Letty I am surely not alway good at interpretation but this one hit me like a ton of bricks. And I might be wrong, hehe.

My first thoughts were, when you consider almost all the men of my age group and that would be lots, the boomers, are buying Harley's putting on their learther's and driving around making a lot of noise. They are trying to be 15 again I think?
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 27 Sep, 2003 11:30 am
Joanne, One of the most beautiful poems that I have ever read by William Stafford, was "The Animal That Drank up Sound". It's long, but it's captivating. I'm still trying to find it on the web.
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JoanneDorel
 
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Reply Sat 27 Sep, 2003 11:42 am
I would like that I am sure.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 27 Sep, 2003 12:38 pm
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JoanneDorel
 
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Reply Sat 27 Sep, 2003 12:44 pm
Thank you Letty very enjoyable and thoughtful. And food for thougt for me.
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