Rites of Passage?

Yes perhaps the motorcycle was a woman and this is a desciption of first sex - men and mototcycles how manly is that?

Wow, Joanne. I never thought about that. I was thinking more along the lines of a boy being a man when he had wheels...but, in retrospect, I suppose the reason a boy wants wheels is to attract the female of the species. Hmmmmmmmm.

Letty I am surely not alway good at interpretation but this one hit me like a ton of bricks. And I might be wrong, hehe.

My first thoughts were, when you consider almost all the men of my age group and that would be lots, the boomers, are buying Harley's putting on their learther's and driving around making a lot of noise. They are trying to be 15 again I think?

Joanne, One of the most beautiful poems that I have ever read by William Stafford, was "The Animal That Drank up Sound". It's long, but it's captivating. I'm still trying to find it on the web.

I would like that I am sure.

Well, Joanne. Will wonders never cease. I found it. Please excuse all the write space, as I had to delete several other poem by Stafford.

















THE ANIMAL THAT DRANK UP SOUND

1
One day across the lake where echoes come now
an animal that needed sound came down. He gazed
enormously, and instead of making any, he took
away from, sound: the lake and all the land
went dumb. A fish that jumped went back like a knife,
and the water died. In all the wilderness around he
drained the rustle from the leaves into the mountainside
and folded a quilt over the rocks, getting ready
to store everything the place had known; he buried?-
thousands of autumns deep?-the noise that had used to come there.

Then that animal wandered on and began to drink
the sound out of all the valleys?-the croak of toads,
and all the little shiny noise grass blades make.
He drank till winter, and then looked out one night
at the stilled places guaranteed around by frozen
peaks and held in the shallow pools of starlight.

It was finally tall and still, and he stopped on the highest
ridge, just where the cold sky fell away
like a perpetual curve, and from there he walked on silently,
and began to starve.

When the moon drifted over the night the whole world lay
just like the moon, shining back that still
silver, and the moon saw its own animal dead
on the snow, its dark absorbent paws and quiet
muzzle, and thick, velvet, deep fur.

2
After the animal that drank sound died, the world
lay still and cold for months, and the moon yearned
and explored, letting its dead light float down
the west walls of canyons and then climb its delighted
soundless way up the east side. The moon
owned the earth its animal had faithfully explored.
The sun disregarded the life it used to warm.

But on the north side of a mountain, deep in some rocks,
a cricket slept. It had been hiding when that animal
passed, and as spring came again this cricket waited,
afraid to crawl out into the heavy stillness.
Think how deep the cricket felt, lost there
in such a silence?-the grass, the leaves, the water,
the stilled animals all depending on such a little
thing. But softly it tried?- "Cricket!" ?-and back like a river
from that one act flowed the kind of world we know,
first whisperings, then moves in the grass and leaves;
the water splashed, and a big night bird screamed.

It all returned, our precious world with its life and sound,
where sometimes loud over the hill the moon,
wild again, looks for its animal to roam, still,
down out of the hills, any time.
But somewhere a cricket waits.

It listens now, and practices at night.

Thank you Letty very enjoyable and thoughtful. And food for thougt for me.