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Is it incorrect to use a comma after name in parenthesis?

 
 
Reply Tue 17 May, 2016 02:02 am
So my friend and I got into a debate about the use of a comma after my "true" name in parenthesis. I am writing an artist biography that uses my artist name throughout the complete bio but I put in a reference to my real name just as anyone would in a biography. Is it improper to write it this way?

A Native of the Bay Area, Tiff (Tiffany Williams), is the youngest
of 3 siblings.

Is it improper to write it this way without the comma?

A Native of the Bay Area, Tiff (Tiffany Williams) is the youngest
of 3 siblings.

or are they both right?
thanks so much in advance for your help!
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Robert Gentel
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Reply Tue 17 May, 2016 02:11 am
@peterpan2016,
If you are going to use the first comma you need the appositive (the second closing one) comma.
peterpan2016
 
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Reply Tue 17 May, 2016 02:12 am
@Robert Gentel,
Hi Robert!

Thank you so much for your prompt response.
So that I follow correctly, since we've added the first comma, this sentence would be correct?

A Native of the Bay Area, Tiff (Tiffany Williams), is the youngest
of 3 siblings.
Robert Gentel
 
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Reply Tue 17 May, 2016 02:22 am
@peterpan2016,
Yes. By use both commas that way you are setting off words that are somewhat unnecessary to the sentence and are using commas correctly.
peterpan2016
 
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Reply Tue 17 May, 2016 02:30 am
@Robert Gentel,
Thank you so much for your help and time!

It is well appreciated!
Robert Gentel
 
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Reply Tue 17 May, 2016 02:31 am
@peterpan2016,
No problem. Edit: if you need a source for your debate see rule 5 here. http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/commas.asp
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Tue 17 May, 2016 03:01 pm
@peterpan2016,
Disagree with Bob. In the example you give, Pete, you don't need that second comma

Tes, do you
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Roberta
 
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Reply Tue 17 May, 2016 03:39 pm
Robert is right. If you've got the first comma, you need the second one.
dalehileman
 
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Reply Tue 17 May, 2016 06:34 pm
@Roberta,
Disagree with Rob. Tes, help
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