Wed 5 Feb, 2014 04:19 pm - Are you trying to say that the comma usage is appropriate?
I agree that the sentences mean that, but I don't believe it is clearly stated. (view)
Wed 5 Feb, 2014 04:11 pm - I'm asking for help with commas in the sentences as-is, but I am also asking for help in improving them. I didn't write the content, I'm just trying to clean it up, so I need advice... (view)