Sun 17 Jan, 2016 10:11 am - My purpose was to paraphrase alle sentences and to retain the main idea.
Are there any other mistakes? Could you please correct them? (view)
Sat 16 Jan, 2016 04:31 pm - Hello guys,
I'm practising to paraphrase sentences by my own words.
Could you please correct my mistakes (just grammar mistakes)?
Thank you so much :)
Original text:
Technology... (view)
