Tue 15 Jan, 2019 11:32 am - Yes that does sound better, thanks! Does it look weird that I have two consecutive sentences with colons? I think that is the part that is bothering me lol (view)
Tue 15 Jan, 2019 08:21 am - I am writing a description for a video game that I am working on and I can't tell if this is grammatically correct. It seems like something is off but I just don't know what it is. Can... (view)
