Mon 21 Nov, 2005 10:34 am - When I sit down to ponder something that's bothering me - not necessarily bad, just on my mind - I ask myself (and God) a lot of questions. But if one doesn't ask the "right"... (view)
Mon 21 Nov, 2005 10:18 am - Thanks for that! "Wow" is always a welcome response. Could you tell me though, what was it that made you say "wow"? I'm actually trying to understand my own writing as... (view)
Mon 21 Nov, 2005 10:15 am - So, I can see that there's been a good number of people who have viewed this poem. I'd really appreciate it if you would post a short impression, whatever it may be, of what you thought.... (view)
Mon 21 Nov, 2005 10:06 am - I used to have a whole idea, and try and express it in a complete writing. Sometimes it worked, but I agree with whoever said that you are your own worst critic. I know that's true for just... (view)
Fri 18 Nov, 2005 09:18 am - Thanks, I'll look it up. Are you saying you think it's unfocused? If so, would you mind being more specific? I understand the book could help, I'm just wondering what led you to... (view)
Fri 18 Nov, 2005 08:58 am - If you haven't already, would you mind taking a look at my other poem? It's entitled "Listen." (not sure if I'll stick with that title tho) (view)
Fri 18 Nov, 2005 08:52 am - Yeah, that sounds good :-) I've actually never heard that term, but it does encompass the process.
Oh, and I forgot to mention in that last post that when I used to always try to make... (view)
Fri 18 Nov, 2005 08:39 am - The date isn't really part of the title of the poem, it's just the date I wrote it. I like knowing when things happened, so I try and keep good records of stuff like that.
As for the... (view)
Fri 18 Nov, 2005 08:31 am - [b]I have this dream, I can't put into words but I'll try
I could use a lot of help, but I'm terrible at asking
Am I thinking too hard? Or not enough
Am I asking the wrong... (view)
Fri 18 Nov, 2005 08:21 am - [b]Beautiful, my Lord and King
No cause for grace have I giv'n
Still kindness shown astounds me
Gratitude fails and words lack in splendor
The debt I owe, paid not by me
For a... (view)
