Mon 12 Aug, 2013 03:22 pm - I wrote this essay in 30 minutes. I welcome your constructive criticisms.
Humans are social creatures and if we want to survive on this planet, it is of crucial importance that we communicate... (view)
Tue 23 Jul, 2013 04:11 pm - I really appreciate it and I m aware of your good intentions and I listen to your suggestions openly but I just need more specific and detailed advices about what went wrong and and how I can... (view)
Tue 23 Jul, 2013 02:59 pm - I m aware of my big mistakes.i m taking my first steps in writing an essay and this is my first English essay that I have tried to write based on what I have learned academicly. (view)
Tue 23 Jul, 2013 02:54 pm - I asked what you think of my first sentence since,as I explained in my first post,my teacher criticized it and said it is ambiguous and misleading but I disagreed with her so you think my first... (view)
Tue 23 Jul, 2013 02:50 pm - thank you so much contrex.
I think I made a mistake that you didn't notice.
supporters of capital punishment have decreased [color=#FF4040]considerably[/color] in number.
I was told this... (view)
Tue 23 Jul, 2013 12:18 pm - hi.i have written an introduction for capital punishment and I am willing to know my mistakes.
Should we put capital punishment to death? in modern and civilized societies,supporters of capital... (view)
