Sun 26 Feb, 2012 12:34 pm - I'm not even gonna reply to that.
You need to work on your lyrics,
flow, and layout of your lines. Example: (Don't write long ass lines like this.)
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Sun 26 Feb, 2012 11:35 am - Nigga you call yoself a "warchild"?,
well shits bout to get wild.
You prolly never seen war,
But me? I'm a sgt in the marine core.
You say you a killer?
You justa lil kid tryna... (view)
Sat 13 Mar, 2010 12:06 pm - Alright Niggaa,
Or should i say wanna be whigga
Man yo kno ur games,
But ill school you all and take yo names
I bet that took you an hour or two,
Bitch you dont even know what you got yoself... (view)
Tue 9 Mar, 2010 11:50 pm - So you call yourself the professor,
But i dont think you gotta degree,
You just a 30 year old loser,
Some kind of boozer
Man yo rymes aint tight,
compared to mine that shine like a light
You... (view)
Tue 9 Mar, 2010 04:10 pm - Alright so ur rymes are pretty tight,
But nigga you all talk you aint got no fight
You talk bout peoples daddys,
but you make yo rap sound like one of them parodys
You think you all hard talkin... (view)
