Mon 15 Nov, 2004 11:43 pm - hello, since someone (rudely) told me to get my own thread here i am.
here are some poems i wrote could someone please review them.
this is a much shorter version of my original poem. tell me... (view)
Mon 15 Nov, 2004 11:38 pm - [quote="stand up for pessimism"]If you want better feed back, I suggest starting your own thread![/quote]well, excuse me i just saw this one and though i'd put mine on here. :( (view)
Mon 15 Nov, 2004 07:37 pm - [quote="kellyvinal"]MMMMMMM yes. This is much better. Except it is a different poem! At any rate, I like it. Absolutely screaming for attention![/quote]um... kellyvinal the person... (view)
Sat 13 Nov, 2004 01:18 am - hey
could someone review my poems?
I hate the way
I hate the way you make me laugh
I hate the way you make me feel
I hate the way I have to pretend
I hate the way you don't... (view)
