Thu 17 Nov, 2022 07:06 am - Thank you for your help.
I shall go with your suggestion of "once they made".
Thanks for clarifying how the difference in timelines changes things 👍 (view)
Thu 17 Nov, 2022 06:11 am - Thank you .
I'm glad you feel that it could be correct too as it makes me feel less stupid for writing it initially ! It's a bit of a conundrum as to why it sounds right when it could be... (view)
Thu 17 Nov, 2022 05:25 am - Thank you for your reply. I agree that does sound much better but I now have a repetition of the word would in quick succession! I'm getting myself in knots over this and maybe should rewrite... (view)
Thu 17 Nov, 2022 03:38 am - I am attempting to write a fantasy novel from a 3rd person POV in the past tense, but I am confused with a particular sentence and not sure if it is correct or not .
The sentence is about the... (view)
