Wed 23 Oct, 2013 11:22 am - It's not the people that disgusted me. It was rather the streets. My teacher told me to be specific at certain parts like what the employees were shouting and what the advertisements say. So... (view)
Wed 23 Oct, 2013 10:26 am - Teacher's Comment: I'd wish to see a bit more vivid,specific detail. You describe practically nothing in detail. This is a rather slight paper, that doesn't really support the... (view)
