Thu 7 Jun, 2007 08:16 am - I must say now that I was very rude and cynical to all of you, and I apologize for everything. I wasn't very nice when replying to your critiques, and again, I'm sorry. Something awful... (view)
Sun 3 Jun, 2007 07:47 pm - For the record, I was NEVER sarcastic. You might've read something and probably thought, "that was probably meant to be sarcastic." But I'm telling you now, it really... (view)
Fri 1 Jun, 2007 10:59 am - Alright, now that that's all been said, it'd be nice to move on now and use this thread for its true purpose and the reason I started it in the first place: for people to critique my... (view)
Fri 1 Jun, 2007 10:08 am - Oh, and Endymion: not everyone's going to like you're writing. Mine is definitely proof of that. I'm sorry that saying I didn't like what you were writing might have destroyed... (view)
Fri 1 Jun, 2007 09:55 am - Wait...so professionals don't write for their own pleasure? I think they do, actually. But whatever. I know I'm not anywhere near being a professional yet. But who really cares? It's... (view)
Thu 31 May, 2007 11:17 pm - I understand that he/she used exaggeration in order to stress his/her point, but the only word that I had in that suggested sentence that could have been considered even remotely wordy was the word... (view)
Thu 31 May, 2007 06:57 pm - Oh, I have a question for you (or for anyone who has the answer, as a matter of fact). Can I edit my posts? Because I've been trying to, but I just don't know how, or if it's an... (view)
Thu 31 May, 2007 06:35 pm - Oops, sorry for posting that twice. I didn't mean to. And some of that text was supposed to be bolded and italicized, but apparently it didn't work out too well. (view)
Thu 31 May, 2007 06:34 pm - Oh, and another thing: I do understand that my writing can sometimes be wordy, but your example for the "purple" passage was a bit overexaggerated, in my opinion. [I]This[I/][B]Ominously,... (view)
Thu 31 May, 2007 06:34 pm - Oh, and another thing: I do understand that my writing can sometimes be wordy, but your example for the "purple" passage was a bit overexaggerated, in my opinion. [I]This[I/][B]Ominously,... (view)
