Mon 23 Oct, 2006 07:51 am - Thanks for the feedback, blacksmithn. I am well aware that poetry doesn't have to rhyme, but I actually find it fun to try. I also find that it gets me thinking about new ways to say... (view)
Sun 22 Oct, 2006 08:55 pm - thanks for the support :)
blacksmithn, do you have any constructive criticism? i tried to pm you, but i am too new to the forums. pm me back if you can. (view)
Sat 21 Oct, 2006 08:18 pm - Just wrote this to stop dwelling.
One Night
Sleeping for years
Keeping my tears
Roused and shaken
I was not mistaken
Aroused to new heights
I turned out the lights
Then turned you... (view)
