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copyright 2005... CM Sackett
AT THE DOOR...
"Was you
aiming for his butt?"
Now, even in the best of times that wouldn't have been very funny. But coming from a voice I'd never heard before, only inches from my ear, in the middle of a thicket where I just "knew" I was the only living thing for miles
it was down right cruel. And how in the world had he gotten so close to me without so much as the whisper of a sound in all these leaves and branches and brambles and briars? I spun around, powered a bit by reflex and a good bit more by embarrassed anger. And I was ready for anything.
Anything, that is, except him .
As my eyes began to lay hold of the body behind the breath on my neck, I saw a man looking intently past me (literally 4" from my shoulder) at my buck laying there on the ground, with my arrow still sticking out of his ham like an antenna on the quarter panel of an old Dodge.
His nose was sharp and short, kind of like you'd see on a pixie, or an elf in some Santa Claus print. His hair was as white as the first snow that would come the next mornin', and was standing up like shocked bundles in front of the short-billed "woolie" he had tilted back on his head. His eyebrows, just under a wrinkled forehead were every bit as hoary and thick and unruly as the tangle we were standing in.
As I took in the rest of his frame at that moment, I noted that his head was stretched to the end of his time-chaffed neck as he studied the scene (hmm, I can't help but chuckle now, thinkin' back on it
he looked like a turtle reaching for a treat
). His shoulders didn't even seem to fill out the faded CPO jacket he wore, but they were soldier-straight. And his arms were back, with his hands past his hip pockets like a skier getting ready for a jump. The man was honestly intent on what he was lookin' at.
And then, with that same intensity, he turned and looked me over.
Under those wild white bushies were the greyest eyes I'd ever looked into
pale and cool, almost like wet granite. In them, I saw a combination of curiosity (as crisp and genuine as that of any child), humor (not malicious, mind you, but damn mischievous nonetheless) and something else, that made me instantly glad I hadn't challenged him, sight unseen. Yessir, these were the eyes of a MAN. I hadn't had much practice at being one yet, but instinctively I recognized one when I saw him.
"You still ain't told me, son
is that where you were aiming?"
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