A "lyric" i done

Hey,
Im pretty new to these stuff but tell me what you think, i tried to make a it a R&B & Hip-Hopish love song thing.. but not too sure.

Feel free to tell me what you think.
Enjoy.

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Remember the goods days and the bad days?



Sometimes.. a girl.. can change you life forever
The memory of the day when you just walked out on me
Is still clear in ma head
Can't you remember the things we went through together?
The happy and sad days but all that matter was we stuck together
And everything just went like that

Sometimes you just make me crazy
I just can't hold that feeling I got for you
Soo please please please how bout you be mine
I know you have the same feeling for me
So why you walk away

"Ohhh ohh Ohhh ohhh, why girl why why why"

Sometimes I can't believe whats happening to me
Girl all I want is for you to be mine again
This feeling making me so crazy
You're the only thing holding me back;
My Baby
My Sweetheart
My Everything
I just hope.. hope.. you were mine

Remember the happy days
When we walked by the beach, waited for the sunset from 11 at night till 6 in the morning?
Remember the first time we kissed
The picture of your smile is still running in ma head
Damn girl I just wish you were here

"Ohhh ohh Ohhh ohhh, why girl why why why"

So So please come back you're my everything and ill do anything

"Ohhh Ohhh Ohhh" *Fades*


By xxJonnyxx