Hoe to split the sentence?

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While she is Korean and speaks the language fluently, the 59-year-old is actually not from South Korea, but from China.

Is the sentence too long? It so, how could it be split?

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@tanguatlay,

the sentence is fine as is...

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@tanguatlay,

You could add a comma after Korean, that would separate the clause "and speaks the language fluently."

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While she is Korean and speaks the language fluently, the 59-year-old is actually not from South Korea, but from China.(/quote]

I would write it this way: She is Korean, and speaks the language fluently. She is from China, not South Korea

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I give up. The last sentence should not be in the quote. Those are my words.

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From China, she also speaks Korean fluently.

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