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Sat 7 Jan, 2023 10:25 am
Today, I would like you all to realise that only those of us who believe in X religion can fundamentally solve misfortunes and problems. I ask you to say a prayer every morning and evening, and participate in the propagation of our religion.
Let's have meetings to study our religion together, and make an effort to improve our own personalities. By propagating our religion, we can bring true peace and tranquillity to the world.
Can someone point out mistakes in the above text? Thanks.
@tanguatlay,
There are no English mistakes, but no real person talks that way.
@Brandon9000,
For a start there shouldn't be a comma after today.
You're a scientist, not a linguist.
You know how you get about pseudo science, well that's how a lot of us feel about your pseudo linguistics.
@izzythepush,
izzythepush wrote:
For a start there shouldn't be a comma after today.
You're a scientist, not a linguist.
You know how you get about pseudo science, well that's how a lot of us feel about your pseudo linguistics.
Thanks.
Are there any other errors?
@tanguatlay,
I'm sorry, but I disagree with any organisation that claims that only it can solve humanity's problems.
I don't want to help spread religious dogma.
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