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Reply Tue 20 Dec, 2022 02:27 pm
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

Please complete the attached form if you still handle these or let me know who to forward to.

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Reply Thu 22 Dec, 2022 09:36 am
@LBrinkmann,
It's a bit wordy. You could say: Please complete the attached form. If you no longer handle these, please forward it to the person who does.

I don't know why you'd assume they may no longer be completing these forms or that they wouldn't automatically either forward it to who does or let you know they're no longer involved; therefore, I wouldn't even bother with the second sentence.
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