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Reply Thu 15 Dec, 2022 08:25 am
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

I have copied John Doe, Vendor Compliance Supervisor, on this email to reach out to you if anything else is needed.
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Reply Thu 15 Dec, 2022 10:24 am
@LBrinkmann,
LBrinkmann wrote:

Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

I have copied John Doe, Vendor Compliance Supervisor, on this email to reach out to you if anything else is needed.

It gets its point across without sounding egregiously wrong.

That said, the following might avoid any ambiguity on the person's identity.
I have copied John Doe, [company name]'s Vendor Compliance Supervisor, on this email to reach out to you if anything else is needed.



LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Thu 15 Dec, 2022 11:07 am
@tsarstepan,
Thank you!
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