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Reply Tue 4 Oct, 2022 01:27 pm
Which sentence is clearer and a better choice:

A gift card in the amount of $300.00 was given to the customer as agreed upon in lieu of making vanity top and ceiling flaw corrections.
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A gift card in the amount of $300.00 was given to the customer as agreed upon in lieu of correcting vanity top and ceiling flaws.
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Reply Wed 5 Oct, 2022 05:02 am
@LBrinkmann,
I would say the latter as that is clearer.
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