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Reply Fri 9 Sep, 2022 08:45 am
Which sentence is clearer and a better choice:

I couldn’t remember which items you said you were putting an order together for.
or
I couldn’t remember which items you said you were putting together an order for.
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Reply Fri 9 Sep, 2022 10:39 am
@LBrinkmann,
I'd say something like:

I couldn't remember which items you are going to order.
LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Sun 11 Sep, 2022 11:39 am
@Mame,
Thank you!
Mame
 
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Reply Mon 12 Sep, 2022 10:09 am
@LBrinkmann,
I think the key to clear communication is the fewer words, the better. Just say what you want to say. Extra words often confound the message.
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