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Reply Thu 16 Jun, 2022 11:46 am
Which sentence is clearer and a better choice:

Before we can schedule the electrician to make the corrections, we need to have them approved by the insurance company.
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Before we can schedule the electrician to make the corrections, we need to have the corrections approved by the insurance company.
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Reply Thu 16 Jun, 2022 12:57 pm
@LBrinkmann,
The first one because the second is repetitious (have the corrections approved). However, I would probably say:

The insurance company must approve the corrections before the electrician is scheduled.
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Reply Thu 16 Jun, 2022 07:38 pm
@Mame,
Thank you!
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